Jan 22, 2013

Hands

Someone should have told us,
that in a world hands make nothing but words and wordlessness,
that hands are barren flesh.


3 comments:

  1. "in a world" does not work i think... the feeling is not whole... but the rest of the poem is good...

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  2. You're right Kush. I was thinking of 'in this world' but it didn't work for me. I want to use world.

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